The Bronze Ring of Time
A young and noble squire named Arthur
Had a love for a fair maiden, Martha
But she was betrothed to a cruel lord
Who kept her locked in his castle hoard
Arthur sought a way to free his dear
And learned of a magic ring most queer
A bronze ring that could bend the flow of time
And grant the wearer power sublime
He journeyed far across the land and sea
To find the ring of ancient mystery
He faced many dangers and ordeals
But never faltered in his zeal
At last he reached a hidden cave
Where dwelt a sage both wise and grave
He asked him for the ring of bronze
And listened to his words with awe
The sage said: "This ring is not for thee
It is a gift from God, you see
It was once worn by a master great
Who used it for a noble fate
He travelled through the ages vast
And witnessed many wonders past
He taught the people truth and grace
And left behind a blessed trace
But he foretold that one would come
Who would misuse the ring for wrong
He would unleash a dreadful doom
And bring the world to ruin soon
Therefore he hid the ring in here
And left behind this riddle clear:
'Who seeks the ring must first repent
And prove his heart is pure and bent
He must perform three tasks of might
And face three trials of fright
He must renounce his worldly gain
And sacrifice his love and pain'
If you can do all this, my son
Then you may have the ring and run
But if you fail or hesitate
Then you will meet a dreadful fate"
Arthur was daunted by the riddle
But he was brave and not so brittle
He said: "I'll do whatever it takes
To win the ring and save my mate"
The sage nodded and led him in
The cave was dark and full of din
He said: "The first task is to slay
A dragon that guards the way"
Arthur drew his sword and shield
And entered the dragon's field
He fought with courage and with skill
And pierced the beast with iron will
He returned to the sage with blood and sweat
And said: "I've done the first task, yet
I'm ready for the next one now"
The sage smiled and said: "You're stout"
He said: "The second task is to climb
A mountain that reaches the sky sublime
At the top you'll find a golden tree
That bears a fruit of destiny
You must pluck the fruit and bring it here
But beware of the eagle that hovers near
It will try to snatch the fruit from you
And tear your flesh with talons true"
Arthur nodded and took a rope
And climbed the mountain's steep slope
He reached the top and saw the tree
That shone with golden majesty
He plucked the fruit and held it tight
But then he heard a screech of fright
He looked up and saw the eagle soar
And dive towards him with fury more
He dodged and ducked and swung his rope
And tried to fend off the bird's hope
But it was fast and fierce and strong
And soon it had him in its throng
It bit his arm and scratched his face
And tried to take him from his place
But Arthur held on to the fruit
And kicked the eagle with his boot
He threw it off and slid down fast
And reached the cave at long last
He gave the fruit to the sage and said
"I've done the second task, but I'm half-dead"
The sage took the fruit and said: "You're brave
You've passed the second task, but one more crave
The third task is to dive into
A lake that lies beyond this view
The lake is deep and cold and dark
And filled with creatures grim and stark
You must find a pearl that lies below
That shines with a heavenly glow
You must bring it back to me alive
But you can only hold your breath for five
Minutes at most, so hurry fast
Or else this task will be your last"
Arthur gasped and said: "This sounds too hard
How can I find a pearl in such a sward?"
The sage said: "Trust in God and pray
He will guide you on your way"
Arthur nodded and took a breath
And dived into the lake of death
He swam through the murky water
And felt the coldness grow stronger
He saw many shapes and shadows
That made him shiver and quiver
He searched for the pearl in vain
And felt his lungs begin to strain
He thought he would never find it
And wished he could just quit
But then he saw a faint light
That pierced the darkness with its might
He swam towards it with hope
And prayed that he could cope
He reached the light and saw the pearl
That glowed with a divine swirl
He grabbed it and turned around
And swam back to the ground
He emerged from the lake with joy
And gave the pearl to the sage with coy
He said: "I've done the third task, I'm done"
The sage said: "You've won the ring, my son"
He gave him the ring of bronze
And said: "You've proved your worth and brawn
But now you must face the trials three
That test your soul and purity"
Arthur put the ring on his finger
And felt a surge of power linger
He said: "What are the trials that await?
Tell me quickly, don't make me wait"
The sage said: "The first trial is to resist
The temptation of wealth and bliss
You must give away all your gold and land
And live as a beggar in this strand"
Arthur was shocked and said: "But why?
I've worked hard for my wealth, I won't lie"
The sage said: "Wealth is a fleeting thing
It can't buy you happiness or bring
You closer to God or your true self
It can only corrupt you and make you delve
Into greed and pride and vanity
And make you lose your sanity
You must renounce your worldly gain
And learn to live with joy and pain
As God has ordained for everyone
Who lives under His sun"
Arthur thought for a while and said: "You're right
Wealth is not worth the fight"
He took off his ring and jewels and coat
And gave them to the sage with a note
He said: "Take these and give them to the poor
I don't need them anymore"
The sage nodded and said: "You've passed the first trial, well done"
But Arthur felt a pang of regret and shun
The sage said: "The second trial is to endure
The pain of loss and grief obscure
You must forget your love for Martha fair
And never see her again or care"
Arthur was stunned and said: "But how?
She is my life, my soul, my vow"
The sage said: "Love is a noble thing
But it can also make you cling
To someone who is not yours to keep
And make you suffer and weep
She belongs to another man
Who has her in his plan
You must renounce your love for her
And learn to live without her stir
As God has ordained for everyone
Who loves under His sun"
Arthur cried and said: "This is too hard
I can't forget her, she's my guard"
The sage said: "You must, or else you'll fail
And never get the ring or hail"
Arthur sobbed and said: "Alright
I'll do it, though it breaks my heart"
He took out a locket with her picture
And gave it to the sage with a rupture
He said: "Take this and bury it deep
I don't want to see it or keep"
The sage nodded and said: "You've passed the second trial, well done"
But Arthur felt a void of sorrow and stun
The sage said: "The third trial is to accept
The will of God and His precept
You must never use the ring of time
For any purpose or crime"
Arthur was confused and said: "But why?
Isn't that why I came here, to try?"
The sage said: "Time is a sacred thing
It belongs to God, not to a ring
You can't change what has been decreed
Or alter what has been agreed
You must live in the present moment
And be grateful for every movement
You must never use the ring of time
Or else you'll commit a sin sublime
As God has ordained for everyone
Who lives under His time"
Arthur thought for a while and said: "You're wise
Time is not ours to devise"
He took off the ring of bronze
And gave it back to the sage with cons
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He sobbed and said: "Alright
I'll do it, though it breaks my heart"
He took out a locket with her picture
And gave it to the sage with a rupture
He said: "Take this and bury it deep
I don't want to see it or keep"
The sage nodded and said: "You've passed the second trial, well done"
But Arthur felt a void of sorrow and stun
The sage said: "The third trial is to accept
The will of God and His precept
You must never use the ring of time
For any purpose or crime"
Arthur was confused and said: "But why?
Isn't that why I came here, to try?"
The sage said: "Time is a sacred thing
It belongs to God, not to a ring
You can't change what has been decreed
Or alter what has been agreed
You must live in the present moment
And be grateful for every movement
You must never use the ring of time
Or else you'll commit a sin sublime
As God has ordained for everyone
Who lives under His time"
Arthur thought for a while and said: "You're wise
Time is not ours to devise"
He took off the ring of bronze
And gave it back to the sage with cons
He said: "Take this and keep it safe
I don't want to use it or chafe"
The sage smiled and said: "You've passed the third trial, well done"
But Arthur felt a peace of surrender and sun
The sage said: "You've done all the tasks and trials
You've shown your courage and your wiles
But you've also shown your faith and grace
And your humility and solace
You've renounced your wealth and love and power
And accepted God's will and His shower
You've proved your heart is pure and bent
And worthy of the ring's intent
Therefore I give you back the ring
But not for you to use or fling
But for you to keep as a token
Of God's love and His spoken
He loves you more than you can know
And He has a plan for you to grow
He will reward you for your deeds
And fulfill your needs
But you must trust Him and obey
And follow His path and way
He will guide you to your fate
And make you happy and great"
Arthur took the ring with awe
And thanked the sage with love and law
He said: "I'll do as you say, I'll trust in God
And follow His rod"
The sage blessed him and said: "Farewell, my son
Your journey has just begun"
He disappeared into the cave
And left Arthur alone and brave
Arthur put the ring on his finger
And felt a warmth of linger
He walked out of the cave with hope
And saw a horse with a rope
He mounted the horse and rode away
Towards the castle where Martha lay
He wondered what would happen next
But he was calm and not perplexed
He reached the castle and saw a crowd
That cheered and clapped and bowed
He asked them what was going on
And they told him with a song
They said: "The king is here, he came last night
He heard of your deeds and might
He was impressed by your skill and grace
And he wants to see your face
He has a daughter who is fair and wise
She is his pride and prize
He wants to make you his son-in-law
And give you his land and law"
Arthur was shocked and said: "But how?
This is too much, I can't allow"
They said: "It's true, it's God's will
He has a plan for you to fill"
Arthur looked up and saw the king there
He was smiling and waving his hair
He came towards him and hugged him tight
And said: "I'm glad to meet you, my knight"
Arthur was stunned and said: "But why?
This is too much, I can't deny"
The king said: "It's true, it's God's grace
He has a plan for us to face"
He told him how he heard of his quest
And how he admired his zest
He told him how he had no son
And how he wanted him to be one
He told him how he had a daughter fair
Who was his joy and care
He told him how she liked him too
And how she wanted him to woo
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He told him how he came last night
And how he met the lord's sight
He told him how he was kind and wise
And how he had a surprise
He told him how he loved Martha fair
And how he treated her with care.
He told him how he wanted him to wed
His daughter and share his fate
He said: "She is waiting for you inside
She is eager to be your bride"
He led him to the hall with joy
And introduced her to his boy
Arthur saw the princess there
She was beautiful and fair
She had golden hair and blue eyes
And a smile that was wise
She looked at him with love and grace
And came towards him with a pace
She said: "I'm glad you're here
You are my dream, my dear"
Arthur was moved and said: "But how?
This is too much, I can't avow"
She said: "It's true, it's God's love
He has a plan for us above"
She told him how she heard his story
And how she felt his glory
She told him how she prayed for him
And how she hoped for him
Arthur said: "Let's get married today
And celebrate our love and sway"
They exchanged their vows and rings
And were crowned as the lord and lady.
Arthur looked at the ring on his finger
And felt a gratitude of linger
He realized that God had given him more
Than he had asked for or bore
He had given him wealth and love and power
But also faith and grace and revealed truth
He had given him the ring of time
But also wisdom and life in rhyme.
He thanked God in his heart
And vowed to play his part
He looked at his bride with joy
And felt a happiness of cloy
The princess looked at him with bliss
And felt a contentment of kiss
She thanked God in her heart
And vowed to play her part
She looked at her husband with pride
And felt a loyalty of side
They held each other's hands with love
And felt a bond of dove
They walked out of the hall with hope
And saw a carriage with good horses
They got in and rode away
Towards their home and stay
They saw Martha and the lord there
They were smiling and waving their hair
The lord came towards them and hugged Arthur tight
And said: "We're happy for you, our knight"
He told them how he met Martha fair
And how he fell in love with her care
He told them how he married her last spring
And how he felt her peak
He told them how he loved her true
And how he wanted her to woo
He told them how he was happy for them
And how he wished them well.
Arthur was glad and said: "But why?
This is too much, I can't deny"
The princess said: "It's true, it's God's grace
He has a plan for us to face"
Arthur and the princess lived happily ever after
And ruled their land with justice and laughter
Martha and the lord lived happily ever after too
And loved their land and people too
And served their king and God true
Symbolic explanation of events:
- The ring of time represents the human desire to control one's destiny and change the past or future according to one's wishes. It also represents the divine gift of free will that allows humans to choose their actions and face their consequences.
- The dragon represents the worldly obstacles that one must overcome to achieve one's goals. It also represents the evil forces that oppose God's plan and try to destroy His creation.
- The mountain represents the spiritual challenges that one must face to reach one's potential. It also represents the ascent to God's presence and His glory.
- The lake represents the emotional depths that one must explore to find one's true self. It also represents the purification of one's soul and the cleansing of one's sins.
- The pearl represents the divine wisdom that one must seek to understand God's will. It also represents the preciousness of one's soul and the beauty of God's grace.
- The fruit represents the divine reward that one must earn to enjoy God's blessings. It also represents the nourishment of one's spirit and the growth of one's faith.
- The eagle represents the divine test that one must pass to prove one's worth. It also represents the protection of God's law and the guidance of His messenger.
- The wealth represents the material possessions that one must renounce to follow God's path. It also represents the attachment to this world and the distraction from God's purpose.
- The love represents the human affection that one must sacrifice to obey God's command. It also represents the loyalty to God's covenant and the devotion to His service.
- The power represents the human authority that one must surrender to accept God's decree. It also represents the submission to God's sovereignty and the recognition of His majesty.
- The king represents the human ruler that one must respect and honor as God's representative. He also represents the justice of God's kingdom and the generosity of His bounty.
- The princess represents the divine partner that one must cherish and love as God's gift. She also represents the harmony of God's creation and the joy of His love.
- The lord represents the human rival that one must forgive and reconcile with as God's creature. He also represents the mercy of God's forgiveness and the peace of His harmony.
- Martha represents the human friend that one must support and wish well as God's servant. She also represents the friendship of God's people and the gratitude of His praise.
Philosophical symbolism:
- The poem illustrates the theme of divine providence, which is the belief that God has a plan for everything and everyone, and that He guides and controls all events and outcomes according to His wisdom and goodness.
- The poem also illustrates the theme of human free will, which is the belief that humans have the ability and responsibility to choose their actions and face their consequences, and that they can either cooperate or resist God's plan according to their faith and grace.
- The poem shows how Arthur chooses to trust in God and follow His path, even when it seems difficult or impossible, and how he is rewarded with more than he asked for or deserved. He renounces his wealth, love, and power, which are his worldly desires, and accepts God's will, which is his spiritual destiny.
He learns to live in the present moment and be grateful for every movement, instead of trying to change the past or future according to his wishes. He realizes that God loves him more than he can know, and that He has a plan for him to grow. He becomes a wise and righteous ruler, who serves God and His people with justice and care.
The poem also shows how Martha chooses to forget Arthur and find a new love, even when it seems hard or painful, and how she is happy with her choice. She renounces her attachment to Arthur, who is her worldly love, and accepts God's command, which is her spiritual duty. She learns to love her husband true, and wish Arthur well too. She realizes that God has forgiven her for her past sins, and that He has a plan for her too. She becomes a loyal and faithful wife, who loves God and her husband with devotion and gratitude.
The poem also shows how the lord chooses to forgive Arthur and reconcile with him, even when it seems unfair or humiliating, and how he is at peace with his decision. He renounces his hatred for Arthur, who is his worldly rival, and accepts God's mercy, which is his spiritual salvation. He learns to treat Martha with care, and honor Arthur as son-in-law of king. He realizes that God has tested him for his good, and that He has a plan for him too. He becomes a kind and generous man, who serves God and his king with respect and generosity.
The poem also shows how the king chooses to honor Arthur and make him his son-in-law, even when it seems risky or surprising, and how he is pleased with his action. He renounces his pride for his daughter, who is his worldly prize, and accepts God's grace, which is his spiritual reward. He learns to respect Arthur's skill and grace, and love him as his son. He realizes that God has blessed him for his deeds, and that He has a plan for him too. He becomes a just and noble king, who rules his land with wisdom and bounty.
The poem also shows how the princess chooses to love Arthur and marry him, even when it seems impossible or miraculous, and how she is joyful with her fate. She renounces her loneliness for her father, who is her worldly protector, and accepts God's love, which is her spiritual partner. She learns to cherish Arthur's glory and story, and woo him as her husband. She realizes that God has answered her prayers, and that He has a plan for her too. She becomes a beautiful and wise lady, who loves her land and people with harmony and laughter.
This is the story of the ring of time
And how it taught a lesson sublime
It showed that God has a plan for all
And that He guides and controls all
It showed that humans have a choice to make
And that they can either cooperate or break
It showed that trusting in God is the best way
And that following His path leads to the sway
It showed that renouncing worldly desires
And accepting spiritual destinies
Is the way to happiness and peace
And the way to wisdom and grace
It showed that God loves us more than we know
And that He rewards us for our deeds
It showed that God has a plan for us to grow
And that He fulfills our needs
So let us learn from this story fine
And let us trust in God divine
Let us renounce our wealth and love and power
And accept His will and His shower
Let us never use the ring of time
Or else we'll commit a sin sublime
Let us live in the present moment
And be grateful for every movement
Let us love God and His people true
And let us wish each other well too
Let us be happy for each other's fate
And let us share each other's state
Let us thank God in our heart
And let us play our part
Let us follow His path and way
And let us pray every day
The end.
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